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the pirate + the princess by kacey-lynn the pirate + the princess by kacey-lynn
I am a pirate, you are a princess
we could sail the seven seas
bring back some presents
for all the people
everyone would love us...

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REBLOG on Tumblr here: [link]

I ship Emma and Hook so hard, guys! It's awful.
please be a couple, please be a couple, please please please.

Once Upon a Time (c) abc
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F, HB, 2b, 3b, 4b
Time: approx. 15 hours
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:iconmisscuriousbird:
Hello untroubledheart! I see that you are requesting a critique for this so I shall do my best in critiquing.

First off, this art is visually pleasing to the eye and the composition you did is nicely done. At first, when I had glanced at this drawing, I thought the waves of the ocean were a part of the woman's hair! So those two parts of the image compliment each other very well.

The 'Originality' is at four stars merely because on a large art website like this, it's quite hard to come across some original ideas. However, I've never seen a 'Pirate/Princess' drawing drawn out like this before so points for originality there.

I love how detailed the man is and the castle in the background is drawn well and isn't overly detailed so it ends up taking the attention away from the two people in front of it. The main focus seems to be the man since he's colored the darkest compared to the rest.

My only problem with this piece is the man's right leg that's submerged in the water and the writing. It seems quite odd that his right leg is suddenly so bright compared to the rest of him. Is it because he's stepped into the water?

As for the writing, I think it would've made more of an impact if it went right across the bottom instead of being a little bunched up in the bottom corner there.

Overall though, this image gives off a storybook feel and is something I could see in one of those adventure books as the title page of a chapter. Very well done, untroubledheart!
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:iconcarrie-lou:
carrie-lou Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Love these two!! :D
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:iconkacey-lynn:
kacey-lynn Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013   General Artist
They're so amazing!! :love:
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:iconcarrie-lou:
carrie-lou Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
agreed! lol :D
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:iconcapital-k:
capital-k Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Student
AMAZING!!!!! I SHIP IT TOO!!!!!:happybounce: Love I am a dummy! :) (Smile) :D (Big Grin) Evil Grin Heart Heart 
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:iconkacey-lynn:
kacey-lynn Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013   General Artist
:woohoo: aww thanks!!! :love:
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:iconsweatpea87:
SweatPea87 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013
Awesome! Simple and lovely.
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:iconkacey-lynn:
kacey-lynn Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013   General Artist
Thank you! :D
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:iconsweatpea87:
SweatPea87 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
Welcome!
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:iconwervelende:
wervelende Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013
Very charming. Reminds me of a fanfiction I read recently in which Emma literally grew up as a princess [(yeah just like me) she was a victim of the night]. The two complement each other perfectly. It's always great when I find a picture to join a story in my mind.
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:iconkacey-lynn:
kacey-lynn Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013   General Artist
Oh that's so cool! :D Thank you, I'm glad you like it :heart:
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:iconkelmarie96:
Kelmarie96 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
Awesomeness ;)
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:iconkacey-lynn:
kacey-lynn Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013   General Artist
Thanks!! :heart:
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:iconnick-xmg:
NICK-XMG Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student Interface Designer
cool
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:iconkacey-lynn:
kacey-lynn Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013   General Artist
Thanks! :D
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:iconblanket86:
blanket86 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
This is so beautiful! Great work! Nice shadding!
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:iconkacey-lynn:
kacey-lynn Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013   General Artist
aw thanks very much!! :D
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:iconhaydaad:
Haydaad Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wonderful drawing. You did a fantastic job! I love all the details you drew into it. Thanks for sharing.
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:iconkacey-lynn:
kacey-lynn Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013   General Artist
Thank you so much!! :heart:
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:iconhaydaad:
Haydaad Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You are most welcome. :^)
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:iconguodaaiko:
guodaaiko Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
it's so amazing so amazing:D :iconamazingplz:
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:iconkacey-lynn:
kacey-lynn Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013   General Artist
Thank you so much!! :love:
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:icononceuponanemma:
onceuponanemma Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
I'm glad i'm not alone! i ship it so hard. anyway this is BEAUTIFUL! You're incredibly talented!
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:iconkacey-lynn:
kacey-lynn Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012   General Artist
aww thanks sooo much!! :love:
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:icontheawesomestnameever:
tHEaWESOMESTnAMEeVER Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
a sexy fine pirate!
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:iconkacey-lynn:
kacey-lynn Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012   General Artist
OH YES :faint:
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:iconmallettepagano1:
MallettePagano1 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Really nice pencil rendering :D
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:iconkacey-lynn:
kacey-lynn Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012   General Artist
Thanks so much! :heart:
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:iconmalfoysangel:
MalfoysAngel Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012
This is so beautiful! I kind of want them to be a couple too. Wanted much more but after seeing how Hook seems to be I donT know. He looks hot but on the inside..
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:iconkacey-lynn:
kacey-lynn Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012   General Artist
Thank you!! :love:
I can't wait to see how they're going to develop Hook's character, and it will be really interesting to see his relationship with Emma progress!!
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:iconacousticslide:
AcousticSlide Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student General Artist
So amazing! You make my art look like second grade scribbles!
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:iconkacey-lynn:
kacey-lynn Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012   General Artist
aw please don't say that! but thank you, I'm glad you like it! :love:
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:iconacousticslide:
AcousticSlide Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks you... :)
I love it! Keep it up!
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:iconwhiterisu:
Whiterisu Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
God this is so beautiful!!! *-*
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:iconkacey-lynn:
kacey-lynn Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012   General Artist
aww thanks so much! :D
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:iconwhiterisu:
Whiterisu Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome ^___^
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:iconmyseagoddess:
MySeaGoddess Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
I love Captain Swan <3
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:iconkacey-lynn:
kacey-lynn Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012   General Artist
:woohoo:
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:iconmyseagoddess:
MySeaGoddess Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
:hooray: :boogie:
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:icondeathrosekitty:
deathrosekitty Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
Amazing. I want them to be a couple too.
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:iconkacey-lynn:
kacey-lynn Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012   General Artist
Thanks!! :love:
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:iconstarrlet209:
starrlet209 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
Awesome drawing
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:iconkacey-lynn:
kacey-lynn Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012   General Artist
aw thanks!! :happybounce:
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:iconcurlythepirate:
CurlythePirate Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is beautiful
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:iconkacey-lynn:
kacey-lynn Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012   General Artist
Thank you!!! :heart:
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:iconmukhina-ks:
Mukhina-KS Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I am totally in love with your work :D
please be a couple, please be a couple
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:iconkacey-lynn:
kacey-lynn Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012   General Artist
awwww thank you so much!!!! :happybounce:
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:iconsilvermoonmagic:
silvermoonmagic Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
incredible artwork:heart:
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:iconkacey-lynn:
kacey-lynn Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012   General Artist
Thanks very much!! :love:
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:iconsilvermoonmagic:
silvermoonmagic Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
You're welcome anytime:heart:
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:iconmmg1195:
mmg1195 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
they belong together.. just as she and graham belonged together and she and august did... I do hope they get together, but history shows something will get in the way.
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